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LITERACY

We have been working on Science Fiction Stories in class. Below are a selection of stories for you to enjoy.

A Mission on Mars and Saturn by Kiranjeet
Two men are going to the rocket centre. They all get ready and pack their stuff. Everything goes into the rocket they are ready he lady in the speaker starts a checklist. 1 hour later... finished. The countdown starts 10,9,8,7 suddenly a dog called Bolt and a cat called Mittens chase each other to the rocket ship. 6,5,4,3, the door closes and Bolt and Mittens are trapped inside 2,1,0, BLAST OFF!!! Uh oh...

Everybody is holding tight as they get ready to go out of the Earth’s atmosphere. When they are out, they float in the rocket Jimmy steers the rocket in the way to Saturn their Mission begins!!! Jimmy and Jack get hungry they eat mouthfuls of food meanwhile Bolt and Mittens try and get out, they find their way to the pod that lands on the plant. There were lots of supplies there and there are the controls Mittens accidently pushed the take off button and the alarm goes off. Jimmy and Jack quickly run to the pod they find the controls bolt and Mittens hide they find Penny and stare in surprise TAKE OFF!!!Oh No... The pod lands on Mars the red planet. Bolt hugs Penny Mitten yawns. Jimmy and Jack find them. Jack asks why they are here. Penny says nervously “I was looking for my dog Bolt and find him at the rocket centre, they ran into the rocket so I do too. I went in but then the rocket suddenly took off. I quickly put on a suit and waited. Now I am here I’m really really sorry.” Jimmy lets them come with them to their mission but now they are stuck on Mars.

“What are we going to do?” asks Penny.”We are going to get out of here of course” replies Jack. “We could go but the engine is empty” said Jimmy. Suddenly little colourful aliens come and meet them and say “hello earthlings you look very very weird, do you need any help?” They stare in surprise everyone thought the aliens were evil then Jimmy said “yes we need to go to Saturn can you help us?”Jimbo said “sure”. The gang go to the big, big, big, 100,ooo,ooox big house

Then Jimmy says to Jimbo “we thought you would be evil.” Jimbo said happily “yey we get that a lot but we are not evil.” Anyway they go into the house and get cleaned up and get some supplies. They fix the engine and meet other aliens. Penny was wondering “how can we get to Saturn?”. Suddenly Jenny came and had the same thought as Penny. “Hey we have this machine that can get you anywhere in the Solar System in just two seconds!” yelled Jenny. Would you like to use it” she told. “Um ask Jimmy and Jack” said Penny nervously. So Jenny asked them they shouted YES!. So everybody said goodbye and went in the machine. “we will miss you” said Jilly . “ guys are the best ‘’ said Jas. Jimbo said to Jimmy “Please don’t let the other humans discover us’’. We won’t we promise’’ said Jimmy. “right guys’’ “yey’’ said Jack and penny. Jack was wondering “First Jimbo said that they get it a lot of from when people come’’. But he didn’t tell his thought to anybody.

So everyone climbed up in the rocket and too Saturn. They had a great time there getting rocks and taking pictures. Penny even wrote a story . Soon after they came back to Earth and told everyone their amazing story but not about the aliens. “I wonder if we can go again sometime” wondered Penny “Maybe” says Jack.



Dr Jhon Alien Attack by Kobe


12:30 HOSPITAL GARATEL RD

“Scissors, knife” called out Doctor Jhon. Suddenly, a green glow came shinning out of the window. Doctor Jhon and Illisabith came immediately to the window. They saw a flying saucer coming smoking down.

Green Martin’s flying saucer:

2 lasers coming out of each side
3 bomb droppers
Spikes on the replacement

‘BANG’ it hit the ground with an explosion. The hospital shock like an earthquake hit. Everyone quickly got under their table. People rushed outside with a mask on. The smoke was rising up vertically. The dust cleared as Martin the alien stepped out with his troops.” Don’t even think about calling the cops” said Martin with an aqua-green laser gun.

Range Gun

Points a light green sharp laser than can cut through anything.
He repeated once more. Everyone ran away as he shot his range gun.

One O’clock.

Marel Hotel.

“This will be a perfect place for a hide out” said one of the troops. “No one will find us”

It had been burnt as was very black. “We will stay here until they do” said Martin greedily “Bwa ha ha ha”

1.25 Doctor Johns Laboratory


Dr John and Illisabeth were setting up a trap. “I thought you ran out of traps” said Illisabeth. “I have, that’s why I’m making a new one” “We can track Martin down on this rampgan”

“ It says he’s in Marel Motel, he’s invaded it”
“Wow that’s pretty hard to invade, it’s been there for 135 years”

Suddenly a man ran in and slammed the door behind him. “Watch it, they could fall off” said Doctor John.
“They’re after me” he said”
“They’re after everyone” he responded.
“Who are you?” asked Illisabeth.
“Cameron” he answered
“Hi I’m Illisabeth, I live two blocks away from here”
“Okay, I can see where this is going, I need G45 to finish off the trap” said Dr John
“Who’s G45?” asked Illisabeth
“My latest creation, here’s the map”
“He’s not on here” said Illisabeth.
“Flip the flap” said Dr John
Illisabeth lifted up the flap.
“Come on, there’s the magaraige, Lets go”

The Magaraige

Two magnets and large wheels on each side.


2.30 Half past middle of city

Green lasers started destroying the city. Everyone screamed. The spun while flying through things with their spikes.


3.00 end of school Dr Jhons Lab

“Quickly, they’re destroying the city already” said Cameron. “Thanks for the tip” said Dr Jhon sarcastically. “That’s ok” said Cameron. “G45, Done” he said. “We’ll have to set it near your house” said Dr John pointing at Cameron. “Mine?” muttered Cameron. “No your Grandma, yes you”. “It’s not going to be an explosion, is it?” asked Cameron. “Nope, just technical stuff” he answered.


3.30 pm Marel Motel

“More back up” declared Martin. “We’ll escape on it, no-one will stop us”.

4.00 Afternoon tea Beach

“G45 like beach” he said to Dr Jhon on the beach. “What’s that thing in the distance?” asked Dr Jhon. G45 used his close up eye-sight on the thing. “G45 says it a ship” he answered. “That must be Marin’s” said Dr Jhon.

Martins Ship

4 cannons on each side
20 rowers on each side

Dr Jhon and G45 hid behind a bush. The large ship stopped just 5 metres away from the shore. Martin stepped on the soft orange sand. “I’ve been waiting for this moment, bwa Ha ha ha ha” said Martin greedily laughing. He stepped on the ship. “Quick, if we can pull chain we can get onto the ship” planning Dr Jhon. They both ran over to the leaving chain. Dr Jhon gripped the chain in his hands, the shi0p started pulling him in the water. The next second he was in deep water. Dr Jhon was struggling to pull himself to the ship. The water was pressing against Dr Johns’ chest, well enough to let him let go. He got there. He knew if won’t get out soon, he will freeze to death. The water was zero degrees. He saw a ladder just beside him about 2 feet away from him. He slipped along the back of the ship to the ladder. Dr Jhon climbed up onto the ship. “Savantary” an alien called out. 3 men ran over to him. He saw a saw balancing on the top of the flat surface. He cu just under him of the wooden pole and then kicked it. The wooden pole fell down with the Aliens on it. Dr Jhon fell down too, but he landed safely. Dr Jhon crept into one of the rooms, it was the prisoner room, nobody was in there. A head of Martin popped up from the window and locked it. “See ya in Hell, I might not cause I’ll be in Heaven” he said walking away. 5 feet away from the ship, G45 on his floaty with Illisabith and Cameron were heading to the ship. When they got there, they climbed the ladder. G45 saw that Dr Jhon was in the prisoner room and unlocked it.

“Thanks, Little Jack” thanked Dr Jhon. “Attack!” said one of the troops, G45 quickly all gave them swords and they had a long battle. Finally Dr Jhon made him drop the sword and stabbed him. Illisabith couldn’t take it, it was gross as all the blood and guts squiggled out.


5.00 tea time Cameron’s house

“Here comes the bride, all fat and …..” Dr Jhon interrupted G45 with nasty reply of “Shut up!” They were just about to kiss when a trap went off and a pit hit Illisabith’s face. “Well, you know what they say, pie beats Alien” said Dr Jhon snickering with G45.

Suddenly a crocodile burst out of a drain.

No. 2 – ‘Dr Jhon and the sewerage croc’


Goozacks and Topias' Problem By Millie

‘ Ah mum what are those bright lights out side’ shouted Selena
‘nothing go back to sleep right now or you are grounded for a month’ Stephany shouted back
“BOOM” all of a sudden the house started to shake frantically like an earthquake one might say.
‘ get down and try get outside” said Austen in his loudest and most scared voice ever. So everyone got outside safely only one scratch because Selena fell down the stairs.

Well back to the big bang I mean boom it was a giant round spaceship
‘ mum what is that thing” whispered Selena staring at this alien like creation
‘ I …I…I don’t know” Stephany whispered back also looking at this alien like creation.

Mean while what the humans didn’t know is that two purple aliens had snuck into
their house while the humans were staring at the ship and what the humans also didn’t know was that if the ship crashed it would explode so that the humans didn’t do all their scientific stuff and find out about the aliens.

All of a sudden a low and scary voice started “scona , fera ,cora, scuscu cu teco
‘ahhhhhhhh” shouted the family as they were flushed back closer and closer to their house.

‘ what is this place?” asked Topia one of the purple aliens to her brother Goozack
‘ what is that?” questioned Goozack staring at Max
‘ bark bark” Max warned his family that someone was inside
so the humans ran inside and saw the aliens
‘H…H…Hello” stutted Stephany
‘ H…H…Hello” Topia and Goozack both stutted at the same time
‘ where are you from” Jack nervesouly asked
“ we are from planet Suntun in another galaxy with only 4 planets because all 8 planets have been made into 4 different planets because there are 2 different planets put together in one” said Goozack trying to act smart when actually topia is.

While that was all happening back on Suntun Paul (Goozack and Topias farther) was commanding orders to locate the lost ship and find his children.

Then back on earth Goozack said ‘ dads probably trying to find us I just know’
Because back on Suntun they were hot on the trail of the lost ship and they were planning when to leave and what ship to talk because this is a very important misson because Goozack and Topia are Pauls children and Paul is the king of all purple aliens.

‘Goozack what if they don’t find us what if they don’t come , Goozack I’m really scared’ whispered Topia hugging her brother and letting all his warmth come trough and lift her spirits.
While this was happening the family of humans were stareing at Goozack and Topia looking amazed ‘
‘ what ’ said Goozack ‘why are you stareing at us’
‘I don’t know’ said Jack who was stareing the most and was still stareing
then they looked outside and there was a huge space ship outside and just as the door opened Jack woke up in his bed thinking and wondering what was happening then looked outside and the dent in the grass where the space ship was was completely gone like someone had come in the middle of the night and fixed it then Jack relaiszed it was all a dream
‘come on Jack or else you will be late for school’ shouted Stephany
and at school Jack told his class about his dream and he got a lolly for shareing such a wonderful story


They Never Saw It Coming by Natasha


“10, 9, 8, 7, 6” said Zerzack the alien space ship captain over the big loudspeaker “5, 4, 3, 2, 1” “ boom, kappow, poof, bang, zoom and crackle ”, as the space ship that the aliens were in, set off from Pluto to Earth. After a month of flying through space they finally saw Planet Earth but as they hovered above Earth, the spaceship ran out of fuel…

It was a normal day on Earth, everyone was at school, work or at home. Then a space ship appeared from the sky, the aliens crashed straight into Banks Avenue School. Everyone fled in fright, they ran into the class rooms, under cars, behind trees and some children even ran home, but Julian, Dick, Anne and George ran into the hall and peered round the door, they wanted to save the universe.

They made a plan together and because their street had tunnels running from house to house underground they decided everyone could hide in them until they managed to kill the aliens, but there was one problem the aliens had captured Trina and Josh from their class. The aliens had by now found the schools lost property clothes and started dressing up as school children and fooling the children that had not been able to hide in time. The aliens had their own plan and kept Trina and Josh and all the little children they fooled as hostages. Everyone was worried about them especially their family and friends but little did they know the aliens had mind powers and were reading and playing with Trina and Josh’s minds.
Now having the information from the minds of the kidnapped children, the aliens decided to sneak into the tunnels, put bags over the human’s heads, take them to the prison cells in their space ship where they keep them alive until they ate some of them for lunch.

But Julian, Dick, Anne and George jumped out and started fighting the aliens. Because the aliens were weak as they hadn’t eaten humans for a while, they all got knocked out easily and the children took all their weapons like lasers and ray guns. Also Worm balls that can read minds, scanners that can tell who lives in a certain houses and a book called “How to Dress up like Humans. They spent lots of time looking for Josh and Trina but they couldn’t find them, they never gave up and when they climbed up into the space ship, Anne yelled out “I FOUND THEM” they were knocked out and covered over with the lost property clothes. Anne and Dick carried Trina and Josh to the hall and stayed to look after them while Julian and George went to the tunnels to tell everyone about their victory. The aliens were starting to wake up and captain Zerzack said to his alien soldiers,

“Bogota toga marsh oz. roe rub rubo orbs robo z sacks tagine ta totty maye hart hue”
Translated:
Are you strong enough to get up?
Ezzep, then said veau ehur nigh runty headk shifg
Translated:
I am ok but I don’t know about the others
Pabzig, said “tgbv bow jfb wae ndhg equek”
Translated:
I’m fine I only have a headache

Then Gug said quietly “abet shah hem fabd heft gaffs gad fatwa aim wyff erg oafs jeur keck weur”
Translated:
Let’s go check on the prisoners and I am absolutely fine
But Zerzack said “tokpiu bofet barey dotre”
Translated: no, because I want to get back to the space ship and fly away these humans are too strong for us!!!

By that time every one was in the tunnels including Josh and Trina because they had all been rescued. Then Anne saw the aliens creeping back to the spaceship. Luckily they didn’t see her and she ran into the hall to warn the others. Julian, Dick, George and Anne were ready to jump at the aliens again but as the aliens were going back to the spaceship the children yelled at them NEVER COME BACK OR NEXT TIME YOU WON’T BE SO LUCKILY. The police came running out and said “well done” and everyone came out of hiding to congratulate them. By then the aliens were speeding away in their space ship into the sky. The heroes had had a wonderful time but their mothers came out and said “that will be your last adventure” but I don’t think it will be……….


ALIEN MONSTERS ATTACK (By Maddie)

‘10,9,8,7,6’ WENT THE LOUDSPEAKER. ‘5.4.3.2.1- BLASTOFF!!’ A CRACK THEN A BOOM, RO AR! SMOKE WENT EVERYWHERE AS THE 100 METRE HIGH ROCKETSHIP BLATSED UP INTO THE EARTHS ATMOSPHERE, SOARING THROUGH THE SKY AND WITHIN A MATTER OF SECONDS THE ROCKETSHIP (AQUABLAZER101) WAS IN THE MIST OF SPACE- TOO BE SUCKED IN BY A BLACK HOLE ONLY MINUTES AFTER TAKE OFF. ‘COMMANDER!’ SCREAMED BEN, ‘ WHATS HAPPENED?’ THE ROCKETSHIP TWISTED AND TURNED FRANTICALLY. ‘BEN IM NOT SURE, I THINK WE GOT STUCK IN BLACK HOLLLLLLE!!!’ THE COMMANDER REPLIED A WHILE LATER, CLINGING ONTO HIS CHAIR FOR DEAR LIFE.

‘GO A GA CHUN TU MA NA TA!’ AMANATUA ZULEA.
‘ JUNGTIN ETU A BUA KAT!’ OOAKLE OOL DAGA TE TEHU RUBNER TA! (TRANSLATION:
‘ THE ROCKETSHIP HAS TAKEN OFF!’ SCREAMED JULIE
‘WE MUST ATTACK EARTH TODAY!’ ALL THE OTHER ALIENS CRIED).

BACK AT THE SHIP, THE HUMANS WERE FINALLY PUSHED OUT OF THE SWIRLING BLACK HOLE AND INTO WHAT LOOKS LIKE OUR GALAXY BUT IT WAS ACTUALLY THE ALIENS GALAXY…

CHUN TU A LUNGA ETUA HAUPEUI MAI TINGA OOVALI CHERSI OOL FOLIES TANGI FAVIO HIBBIE HOEL CHURGAI COMICEL OERANGEY RUNNY XCIE GIVUPIE HA. (TRANSLATION: SUDDENLY THE ALIEN NEWS CAME ON AND THERE WERE CHEERS ALL AROUND AS IT WAS ANNOUNCED THAT HUMANS HAD ENTERED THE GALAXY.)

‘GO GA G A LADA MAI HANA!’ (MISSION A IS AN ALL GO!) GOLI ZULEA A BUBCO (CALLED JULIE AND JAKOB)
‘BOO IN CLOCA PAHA! BOO IN CLOCA PAHA!’ COOCA JAJANU (GET ON BOARD THEIR SHIP! GET ON BOARD THERE SHIP!’ SHOUTED EVERYONE ELSE). SO IT WAS OFFICIAL, THE ROCKETSHIP THAT HAD BEEN LAUCHED EARLIER THAT DAY WAS GOING TO INVADE THE EARTHS ROCKETSHIP. ALL FIVE ALIENS (JULIE – BOY JAKOB-GIRL STEPHANY-BOY JOE-LILY-HE/SHE ZARRIE-JACK-HE/SHE) GOT IN THEIR GEAR. OVER TOP THEY PUT ON HUMAN OUTFITS AND ASTRONAUT SUITS AND SENT THEMSELVES OUT OF THEIR SHIP....

‘JANIE?’ WHISPERED BEN,
‘YES?’ JANIE REPLIED.
‘WELL I KIND OF WANTED TOO…’
‘HEY GUYS CHECK IT OUT!”
‘WHAT?!’ SCREAMED BEN
‘WOAH SOMEONES GRUMPY’ REPLIED ROBBY ‘ANYWAY THERES THESE DEAD HUMAN BODIES JUST FLOATING AROUND OUR SHIP!
‘YES THIS IS TRUE.’ THE COMMANDER INTERUPTED STERNLY.
‘WELL ARE WE GOING TO TAKE THEM BACK TO EARTH? ASKED JANIE.
‘PLEASE COMMANDER PLEASE!’ ROBBY AND BEN PLEADED DESPERATELY. ‘OKAY, I’LL GET THEM, JANIE, YOU TAKE THE CONTROLS ‘ ANSWERED THE COMMANDER. SO THE COMMANDER WENT OUT OF THE SHIP AND BROUGHT IN THE 5 DEAD HUMANS OR SHOULD I SAY 5 ALIENS. 1HOUR LATER…

‘WHERE SHOULD WE PUT THEM?’ ASKED ROBBY.
‘YEAH WHERE’ BEN ECHOED. OF COURSE THE COMMANDER WASN’T SURE SO HE LET JANIE DECIDE. SHE DICIDED TO PUT THEM IN THE EXTRA CLOSET AT THE BOTTOM OF THE ROCKETSHIP. SO AS SOON AS THE HUMANS CLOSED THE DOORS THE ALIENS GOT OUT OF THEIR COSTUMES AND EXITED THE CLOSET.

‘ CHUNA ETUA LACKA PBLI TUO SOESM’ CUEND ZUELA, BUBCO. ZANET BOMI-ZICK, BUTUA-ZACH. (‘WE JUST WALK UP THE HALLWAY TO THE CONTROLS!’ SUNG JULIE, JAKOB, STEPHANY, JOE-LILY, ZARRIE-JACK.) THE ALIENS WALKED 10 METRES BEFORE THEY CAME UPON ROBBY. ITS HARD TO SAY WHO WAS MORE SCARED, ROBBY OR THE ALIENS. NO ROBBY WAS MORE SCARED QUITE OBVIOUSLY AS THE ALIENS IMMEDIATELY RAN FORWARD TO KILL HIM, USING ALL HIS ATHLETIC ABILITY HE TRIED TO RUN BUT OF COURSE THAT DIDN’T HELP HIM……
BECAUSE THERE WAS NO GRAVITY! SO INSTEAD HE SCREAMED. THE COMMANDER CAME OUT AND SHOT ONE OF THE ALIENS WITH A RAY GUN. HE WOULD HAVE SHOT THE REST BUT JULIE PULLED OUT A BAZOOKA AND FIRED IT UP. EVERYONE RAN AS FAST AS THE COULD BUT UNFORTUNATLY THE COMMANDER WAS SHOT AND KILLED. THE KIDS DID NOT REALISE BUT THE SHIP WAS HEADING TOWARDS ANOTHER BLACKHOLE. SUDDENLY THE SHIP TWISTED AND TURNED-----THE BLACK HOLE.

THE BACK DOOR OF THE ROCKETSHIP SLID OPEN AND TWO ALIENS FELL OUT, THE OTHER TWO WERE SMART AND HUNG ONTO SOMETHING AS DID THE CHILDREN. ‘HEY ARE YOU GUYS ALRIGHT’ YELLED JANIE
‘YES!’
‘YIP!’ THE BOYS REPLIEDD
‘GRAB THE GUNS’ JANEY SCREAMED ‘SHOOT NOW’
BOOM! BOOM! WHOOSH! POW! CLONK!
THE ROCKETSHIP STOPPED TURNING. THEY WERE BACK IN OUR GALAXY BUT WHERE WERE THE ALIENS?! ‘THEY ARE GONE!’ CALLED BEN .
‘HOORAY’ SCREAMED ROBBY (BOTH THE BOYS FORGOT ABOUT THE COMMANDER DYING
‘NO THEY CAN’T BE… WAIT YES! IT SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE MUNCHING ON SOMETHING…
THEY ALL TURNED AROUND AND SAW THE TWO ALIENS CHEWING ON THE COMMANDER. SUDDENLY THE ALIENS GREW BIGGER AND BIGGER TILL THEIR HEADS WERE TOUCHING THE ROOF. THE BOYS STARTED SHOOTING THEM BUT IT WAS NO USE. THEN JANIE SAW THE BAOOZKA. SHE SAW IT ONLY HAD TWO BULLETS LEFT SO SHE TRIED IT. SHE PULLED THE TRIGGER-BANG!! THE FORCE WAS SO STRONG THAT THE BAOOZKA FLUNG UP AND SHOT THE ROOF. JANIE FELL TO THE GROUND BEN RAN OVER AND KISSED HER ON THE CHECK! JANIE JUMPED UP AND SLAPPED HIM. ROBBY CAME OVER ‘SICKO AND JANIE THE FORCE WAS TOO STRONG FOR YOU’
‘ I REALIZE THAT’ SHE REPLIED
‘ WE HAVE TO PUT OUR STRENGTH TOGETHER AND SHOOT ON 3, READY?3,2,1!’ BANG! IT SHOT THROUGH JULIE AND INTO JACOB. THE ALIENS DIED. BUT HOW WERE THE KIDS GOING TO GET BACK TO EARTH? ‘ I HAVE AN IDEA’ SHOUTED BEN
‘WHAT’ ROBBY REPLIED
‘ WE MOVE ALL THE FURNITURE TO ONE SIDE OF THE ROCKETSHIP SO THAT IT WILL MOVE TO ONE SIDE THEN EARTHS GRAVITY CAN PULL US IN!’ AND SO IT WAS, BENS PLAN WORKED AND THE THREE CHILDREN WERE SAFE ON EARTH! THE CHILDREN TOLD THE STATION WHAT HAPPENED BUT NO ONE BELIEVED THEM. THEY SAID IT WAS TRUE BUT STILL NO ONE BELIEVED THEM. AT THAT MOMENT JANIE TOLD EVERYONE TO CHECK THE SECURITY CAMERAS SO THEY DID. THEY SAW IT WAS TRUE. THE KIDS GOT AWARDS AND MONEY AND BECAME FAMOUS. A BIG MEMORIAL WAS HELD FOR THE COMMANDER. EVERYONE LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER- EXCEPT THE ALIENS…