In room 22 we've been learning to make sentences more interesting. First we got a sentence like 'Mum drove the car' and asked ourselves 'how could we get this more interesting?' and kept changing the sentence until we got to
'Mum raced the 4 wheel drive way faster than the speed limit which was 50 because she was 30 minutes late for work.'
Here is another example:
I went to bed.
I jumped into bed.
I leaped into bed.
I leaped into my nice, cozy warm bed.
I leaped into my nice warm cozy feather bed because I was tired.
I leaped into my nice warm cozy feather bed because I was too tired to do anything else.
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