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Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Dr Jhon Alien Attack by Kobe

12:30 HOSPITAL GARATEL RD

“Scissors, knife” called out Doctor Jhon. Suddenly, a green glow came shinning out of the window. Doctor Jhon and Illisabith came immediately to the window. They saw a flying saucer coming smoking down.

Green Martin’s flying saucer:

2 lasers coming out of each side
3 bomb droppers
Spikes on the replacement

‘BANG’ it hit the ground with an explosion. The hospital shock like an earthquake hit. Everyone quickly got under their table. People rushed outside with a mask on. The smoke was rising up vertically. The dust cleared as Martin the alien stepped out with his troops.” Don’t even think about calling the cops” said Martin with an aqua-green laser gun.

Range Gun

Points a light green sharp laser than can cut through anything.
He repeated once more. Everyone ran away as he shot his range gun.

One O’clock.

Marel Hotel.

“This will be a perfect place for a hide out” said one of the troops. “No one will find us”

It had been burnt as was very black. “We will stay here until they do” said Martin greedily “Bwa ha ha ha”

1.25 Doctor Johns Laboratory

Dr John and Illisabeth were setting up a trap. “I thought you ran out of traps” said Illisabeth. “I have, that’s why I’m making a new one” “We can track Martin down on this rampgan”

“ It says he’s in Marel Motel, he’s invaded it”
“Wow that’s pretty hard to invade, it’s been there for 135 years”

Suddenly a man ran in and slammed the door behind him. “Watch it, they could fall off” said Doctor John.
“They’re after me” he said”
“They’re after everyone” he responded.
“Who are you?” asked Illisabeth.
“Cameron” he answered
“Hi I’m Illisabeth, I live two blocks away from here”
“Okay, I can see where this is going, I need G45 to finish off the trap” said Dr John
“Who’s G45?” asked Illisabeth
“My latest creation, here’s the map”
“He’s not on here” said Illisabeth.
“Flip the flap” said Dr John
Illisabeth lifted up the flap.
“Come on, there’s the magaraige, Lets go”

The Magaraige

Two magnets and large wheels on each side.


2.30 Half past middle of city

Green lasers started destroying the city. Everyone screamed. The spun while flying through things with their spikes.


3.00 end of school Dr Jhons Lab

“Quickly, they’re destroying the city already” said Cameron. “Thanks for the tip” said Dr Jhon sarcastically. “That’s ok” said Cameron. “G45, Done” he said. “We’ll have to set it near your house” said Dr John pointing at Cameron. “Mine?” muttered Cameron. “No your Grandma, yes you”. “It’s not going to be an explosion, is it?” asked Cameron. “Nope, just technical stuff” he answered.


3.30 pm Marel Motel

“More back up” declared Martin. “We’ll escape on it, no-one will stop us”.

4.00 Afternoon tea Beach

“G45 like beach” he said to Dr Jhon on the beach. “What’s that thing in the distance?” asked Dr Jhon. G45 used his close up eye-sight on the thing. “G45 says it a ship” he answered. “That must be Marin’s” said Dr Jhon.

Martins Ship

4 cannons on each side
20 rowers on each side

Dr Jhon and G45 hid behind a bush. The large ship stopped just 5 metres away from the shore. Martin stepped on the soft orange sand. “I’ve been waiting for this moment, bwa Ha ha ha ha” said Martin greedily laughing. He stepped on the ship. “Quick, if we can pull chain we can get onto the ship” planning Dr Jhon. They both ran over to the leaving chain. Dr Jhon gripped the chain in his hands, the shi0p started pulling him in the water. The next second he was in deep water. Dr Jhon was struggling to pull himself to the ship. The water was pressing against Dr Johns’ chest, well enough to let him let go. He got there. He knew if won’t get out soon, he will freeze to death. The water was zero degrees. He saw a ladder just beside him about 2 feet away from him. He slipped along the back of the ship to the ladder. Dr Jhon climbed up onto the ship. “Savantary” an alien called out. 3 men ran over to him. He saw a saw balancing on the top of the flat surface. He cu just under him of the wooden pole and then kicked it. The wooden pole fell down with the Aliens on it. Dr Jhon fell down too, but he landed safely. Dr Jhon crept into one of the rooms, it was the prisoner room, nobody was in there. A head of Martin popped up from the window and locked it. “See ya in Hell, I might not cause I’ll be in Heaven” he said walking away. 5 feet away from the ship, G45 on his floaty with Illisabith and Cameron were heading to the ship. When they got there, they climbed the ladder. G45 saw that Dr Jhon was in the prisoner room and unlocked it.

“Thanks, Little Jack” thanked Dr Jhon. “Attack!” said one of the troops, G45 quickly all gave them swords and they had a long battle. Finally Dr Jhon made him drop the sword and stabbed him. Illisabith couldn’t take it, it was gross as all the blood and guts squiggled out.


5.00 tea time Cameron’s house

“Here comes the bride, all fat and …..” Dr Jhon interrupted G45 with nasty reply of “Shut up!” They were just about to kiss when a trap went off and a pit hit Illisabith’s face. “Well, you know what they say, pie beats Alien” said Dr Jhon snickering with G45.

Suddenly a crocodile burst out of a drain.

No. 2 – ‘Dr Jhon and the sewerage croc’

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