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Wednesday, July 6, 2011

A Mission on Mars and Saturn by Kiranjeet

Two men are going to the rocket centre. They all get ready and pack their stuff. Everything goes into the rocket they are ready he lady in the speaker starts a checklist. 1 hour later... finished. The countdown starts 10,9,8,7 suddenly a dog called Bolt and a cat called Mittens chase each other to the rocket ship. 6,5,4,3, the door closes and Bolt and Mittens are trapped inside 2,1,0, BLAST OFF!!! Uh oh...

Everybody is holding tight as they get ready to go out of the Earth’s atmosphere. When they are out, they float in the rocket Jimmy steers the rocket in the way to Saturn their Mission begins!!! Jimmy and Jack get hungry they eat mouthfuls of food meanwhile Bolt and Mittens try and get out, they find their way to the pod that lands on the plant. There were lots of supplies there and there are the controls Mittens accidently pushed the take off button and the alarm goes off. Jimmy and Jack quickly run to the pod they find the controls bolt and Mittens hide they find Penny and stare in surprise TAKE OFF!!!Oh No... The pod lands on Mars the red planet. Bolt hugs Penny Mitten yawns. Jimmy and Jack find them. Jack asks why they are here. Penny says nervously “I was looking for my dog Bolt and find him at the rocket centre, they ran into the rocket so I do too. I went in but then the rocket suddenly took off. I quickly put on a suit and waited. Now I am here I’m really really sorry.” Jimmy lets them come with them to their mission but now they are stuck on Mars.

“What are we going to do?” asks Penny.”We are going to get out of here of course” replies Jack. “We could go but the engine is empty” said Jimmy. Suddenly little colourful aliens come and meet them and say “hello earthlings you look very very weird, do you need any help?” They stare in surprise everyone thought the aliens were evil then Jimmy said “yes we need to go to Saturn can you help us?”Jimbo said “sure”. The gang go to the big, big, big, 100,ooo,ooox big house

Then Jimmy says to Jimbo “we thought you would be evil.” Jimbo said happily “yey we get that a lot but we are not evil.” Anyway they go into the house and get cleaned up and get some supplies. They fix the engine and meet other aliens. Penny was wondering “how can we get to Saturn?”. Suddenly Jenny came and had the same thought as Penny. “Hey we have this machine that can get you anywhere in the Solar System in just two seconds!” yelled Jenny. Would you like to use it” she told. “Um ask Jimmy and Jack” said Penny nervously. So Jenny asked them they shouted YES!. So everybody said goodbye and went in the machine. “we will miss you” said Jilly . “ guys are the best ‘’ said Jas. Jimbo said to Jimmy “Please don’t let the other humans discover us’’. We won’t we promise’’ said Jimmy. “right guys’’ “yey’’ said Jack and penny. Jack was wondering “First Jimbo said that they get it a lot of from when people come’’. But he didn’t tell his thought to anybody.

So everyone climbed up in the rocket and too Saturn. They had a great time there getting rocks and taking pictures. Penny even wrote a story . Soon after they came back to Earth and told everyone their amazing story but not about the aliens. “I wonder if we can go again sometime” wondered Penny “Maybe” says Jack.

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