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Wednesday, July 6, 2011

They Never Saw It Coming by Natasha

Here is Natasha's science fiction story:

“10, 9, 8, 7, 6” said Zerzack the alien space ship captain over the big loudspeaker “5, 4, 3, 2, 1” “ boom, kappow, poof, bang, zoom and crackle ”, as the space ship that the aliens were in, set off from Pluto to Earth. After a month of flying through space they finally saw Planet Earth but as they hovered above Earth, the spaceship ran out of fuel…

It was a normal day on Earth, everyone was at school, work or at home. Then a space ship appeared from the sky, the aliens crashed straight into Banks Avenue School. Everyone fled in fright, they ran into the class rooms, under cars, behind trees and some children even ran home, but Julian, Dick, Anne and George ran into the hall and peered round the door, they wanted to save the universe.

They made a plan together and because their street had tunnels running from house to house underground they decided everyone could hide in them until they managed to kill the aliens, but there was one problem the aliens had captured Trina and Josh from their class. The aliens had by now found the schools lost property clothes and started dressing up as school children and fooling the children that had not been able to hide in time. The aliens had their own plan and kept Trina and Josh and all the little children they fooled as hostages. Everyone was worried about them especially their family and friends but little did they know the aliens had mind powers and were reading and playing with Trina and Josh’s minds.
Now having the information from the minds of the kidnapped children, the aliens decided to sneak into the tunnels, put bags over the human’s heads, take them to the prison cells in their space ship where they keep them alive until they ate some of them for lunch.

But Julian, Dick, Anne and George jumped out and started fighting the aliens. Because the aliens were weak as they hadn’t eaten humans for a while, they all got knocked out easily and the children took all their weapons like lasers and ray guns. Also Worm balls that can read minds, scanners that can tell who lives in a certain houses and a book called “How to Dress up like Humans. They spent lots of time looking for Josh and Trina but they couldn’t find them, they never gave up and when they climbed up into the space ship, Anne yelled out “I FOUND THEM” they were knocked out and covered over with the lost property clothes. Anne and Dick carried Trina and Josh to the hall and stayed to look after them while Julian and George went to the tunnels to tell everyone about their victory. The aliens were starting to wake up and captain Zerzack said to his alien soldiers,

“Bogota toga marsh oz. roe rub rubo orbs robo z sacks tagine ta totty maye hart hue”
Translated:
Are you strong enough to get up?
Ezzep, then said veau ehur nigh runty headk shifg
Translated:
I am ok but I don’t know about the others
Pabzig, said “tgbv bow jfb wae ndhg equek”
Translated:
I’m fine I only have a headache

Then Gug said quietly “abet shah hem fabd heft gaffs gad fatwa aim wyff erg oafs jeur keck weur”
Translated:
Let’s go check on the prisoners and I am absolutely fine
But Zerzack said “tokpiu bofet barey dotre”
Translated: no, because I want to get back to the space ship and fly away these humans are too strong for us!!!

By that time every one was in the tunnels including Josh and Trina because they had all been rescued. Then Anne saw the aliens creeping back to the spaceship. Luckily they didn’t see her and she ran into the hall to warn the others. Julian, Dick, George and Anne were ready to jump at the aliens again but as the aliens were going back to the spaceship the children yelled at them NEVER COME BACK OR NEXT TIME YOU WON’T BE SO LUCKILY. The police came running out and said “well done” and everyone came out of hiding to congratulate them. By then the aliens were speeding away in their space ship into the sky. The heroes had had a wonderful time but their mothers came out and said “that will be your last adventure” but I don’t think it will be……….

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