Welcome. This blogsite is a place to share and extend the learning that is happening in Rm 22. It is a place for the sharing of student work, links to sites that might help you with your homework or build on things we discuss at school. There is a message board where you can communicate with the rest of the class: http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/banksaveroom22. Enjoy exploring the site and e-mail me anything you would like to share on the blog:-) Ms Watson
Tuesday, August 9, 2011
Angelica's Information Report
This report is written by Angelica and is about Koalas. Click on the image so that you can enlarge it to read it.
Angelica you have used excellent description and great detail in your report. I like the way you thought about the reasons why different features of their bodies are important for their lives. Next time use headings for each of your paragraphs so that the reader can know where to find different types of information about your animal. Ms Watson
Angelica you have used excellent description and great detail in your report. I like the way you thought about the reasons why different features of their bodies are important for their lives. Next time use headings for each of your paragraphs so that the reader can know where to find different types of information about your animal. Ms Watson
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