Millie has already started working on her part of our entry for the skiing and snowboarding competition. Here are a couple of poems that she has written. I love the imagery that she uses - I feel like I could close my eyes and imaging being inside her poem - the smells, the sounds, the feel of the place and the animals. I hope that you enjoy them too!
Willow
Out playing with Willow
With just a silent chill
As her tail flicks here then there
As her hooves stomp
I often think of running away
But I know there is no reason to be afraid
And I often think what will I do when she’s gone
Because I know one day she will no longer be there.
What I think
As I first step out
I feel cold and wet from the earth below
But when I reach Willow her breath soon warms me up
Then the first rays of sun start to appear
And then I bring out some food
As her tongue stars to wind
All that is left is just a slobbery wet feeling
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