Welcome. This blogsite is a place to share and extend the learning that is happening in Rm 22. It is a place for the sharing of student work, links to sites that might help you with your homework or build on things we discuss at school. There is a message board where you can communicate with the rest of the class: http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/banksaveroom22. Enjoy exploring the site and e-mail me anything you would like to share on the blog:-) Ms Watson

Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Natasha's End of Unit Report

Here is Natasha's final report for our Information Report Topic. I really like the way she has used sub-headings to organise her information. She has also very effectively summarised the most important pieces of information about Godwits. If you are still at the note-taking/drafting stage, I would make sure that you do some research this afternoon/evening and bring those notes to school with you tomorrow. This will be very helpful for the writing stage (as there is nothing worse than not having enough information - it's like trying to make a yummy sandwich with only bread and a tiny bit of margarine).
Read Natasha's report and think about some feedback you could give her - something she did well and something she could improve on or do differently next time.




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